cinquain poem

 for the last few minutes i have been working on my cinquain poem.we had to chose a animal and we had to search and look for words about about our animale.my animale was a lion.for example i chose zestful and intense describing what the animal dose and what its known fore.we also had to chose there words about the animal but it had to end with (ing).i chose king of the jungle because we had to chose a phrase with 4 words.lastly i had to chose  a better word and a better noun for lion. hope you enjoy this poem.

independent activatys.

 at the start of term 2 week 1 we started to do independent activatys.one of those activities was prototec.this was probably my second favourite thing to do in my slide.prototec helps with your maths and im getting better.

Wolf attck

for the last two weeks we have been writing a narrative. we had to make our own one up and create a good peace of writing.  i write a peace of writing talking about these three boys called joey,bailey and johnny. they went to explore this haunted forest. as going through the forest they see a house and go and explore.they see a wolf and it attacks them jey gets attacked and johnny and bailey ran away from the wolf and left joey behind.johnny comes back grabs the johnny comes to stabes the wolf all of them ran away scared and terrified but also laughing. they make it back to joeys house and are safe and sound.

 

                             wolf attack

There once was a town in the middle of two huge mountains. The town's name was called Main String.There lived three boys called Joey,Johnny and Bailey.They were well known there.They loved to explore new places and there was something about this town that they didn't understand. The people in the town often acted weird and mysterious. 

Joey was a quiet and very brave boy that loved to explore and was very very fast. Johnny was aggressive,predictive and selfish and lastly Bailey. He was selfish,stubborn and fearless. 

The next morning Joey felt like exploring. He wanted to go and explore nearby where he had heard about the legends of Mystery Forest. He went to Bailey's house and there he saw Bailey and Johnny. He was happy that he didn’t have to go all the way to Johnny house.

They didn’t know where to go, they just knew the direction to go in. They came upon the forest. It was dark,bushy and felt haunted. It was very scary. The forest had long trees that hung down over the path making it hard to walk through the forest.  “Apparently there is a haunted house with spiders and all sorts of disgusting insects and bugs,” stated Joey.  “ They say that the house has pieces of broken wood poking out of the big mold and disgusting colors all over the house.   That an old lady has stayed there for decades.  Also there is a big furious wolf that guards the house and never falls asleep or even blinks,” continued Joey.  Johnny replied “I heard that there once was an old lady that stayed there and the wolf ripped the old ladies head off in madness and after discovering that, they had a cat that was treated better than the wolf.”

The walked slowly through the forest, they heard a growling coming from the bush and footsteps getting loudly. Suddenly a figure jumped from the bushed, it was the wolf they had heard about. He had big teeth and grey wilk, wooly hair.  Johnny and Bailey ran away there leaving Joey there by himself.

That alerted the wolf and it ran directly towards Joey. It jumped on joey and bit him but he never gave up and protected himself from this furious beast.

As Johnny and Bailey were running away, Johnny started arguing about leaving Joey behind. Johnny ran back and grabbed the wolf from behind. Sadly he got bit so hard in his arm that it went through his arm. He screamed and that scream was so loud that it alerted Bailey so Bailey came back, jumped off this little ledge and stabbed  the vicious wolf.

All the boys ran away in fear but also laughing that they went on a great adventure and survived a wolf attack. As they got back to Joey's house they celebrated that they had killed a wolf and learned that the legends in the mystery town were not false but were true. 

All three boys still are scared that the wolf wasn’t really dead. Several years after that all boys became great explorers. They still talk about their first ever time they went exploring and are now most likely discovering new things for this mysterious world.

snack attack

 Hi my name is Hirini and  I am 12 years old and this is my first blog post of 2021.I am a year 8 at KawaKawa Primary Primary School and we have been learning about narrative writing. We had been making our own narrative.We had watched two short stories.We had to pick a movie ethier snack attack or the present. i chose snack attack. Here it is.

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Creative writing

Hi welcome to my creative writing. im a really good writer and i would love it if you read it.

My writing is made up story that i made. it talks about me a ghost and two figures.

Writing

It was a lonely night at 3am to be Exact .The wind blew like there was a tornado directly beside me. 

I was afraid of nothing, well that's what I thought until I saw a spooky figure in the dark. I froze for about 30 seconds, steering at the figure, then I ran. My heart beat faster than the jet. I couldn't believe what I saw.

Suddenly, I tripped. At that exact moment I felt like it was just a dream but I realised that the figure was getting closer and closer.  I passed out for quite a long time. I'm sure it was about 3 to 4 hours. When I woke up there was no one around. I was in a room with a flickering light, cutting in and out.

Out of the shadows, something that looked like a ghost bolted into my body. I was shocked and surprised that I woke up in my bed and at home. I felt like I was just dreaming until I figured that it wasn't a dream. I was back, but I wasn’t myself. My head hurt and I started doing different and unordinary things. I never left the house. There was a barrier or something blocking my way. I started seeing things and once again, .I fell on the ground and passed out for the third time. When I woke up I lay in a coffin terrified and it was definitely not comfortable in a small area and also I thought that I died. I banged furiously on the wall and my hand passed through the wall. I rised all the way through the coffin into the world outside. I was a ghost!. but Every 3 seconds I would see a photo, a vision of the black figure. This stranger was giving me nightmares! After about 5 months of being a ghost and experiencing strange things, something happened. The black figure must have teleported me directly in front of this figure. It went to attack me. Even though I was a ghost, it bit my arm off. It was very painful. The pain was beyond anything I have felt. I was not sure after that because it went black and I couldn't see anything. I was afraid and couldn't believe it bit my arm off. Then someone in a dark black and red clock walked in the room. I was terrified. Especially because it was just me and the person in the clock in the room i was sure i was shaking like an earthquake. The person in the clock had a sword in his hand.at first I thought that he was going to cut me. I was shocked until I managed to escape the ropes I was tied in and ran my fastest to the exit but then i ran back and took the sword from the man in the clock door. Then boosted it out to the exit. As I got out of the room there stood the black figure staring directly into my eyes. The figure stood at the end of the hall.. I did what any brave person would do. I ran straight towards it feeling fear but getting over it. I held the sword and aimed it towards the figure's heart. With all my strength, I pierced his heart and sent him back to where he came from. I was glad he was gone. I was no longer scared.

 

arataki group

 

Culture study. (China)

Here is my and braxtons slide show about china.

It was easy and hard but it was fun.

I really enjoyed it because i learned new things about china.

Next time i will improve on my work by putting some more words in our sentences.