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Monday 11 March 2019

Free writing

In the weekend i helped my grandfather cut his fish that him and Sam caught well going fishing when we were chomping up the fish i saw  little eggs in the snapper i took the eggs out and splat them on the road then they got run over so i through the guts and stuff that we don´t need  away so the dog can eat it when we were  finish with the fish we freeze the fish then cook it all up then eat it at 8:19 at night after we were finish with the fish we gave the resat to the dog to eat it gobbled it all up he broke his own record he beat 12 seconds
 he ate for 7 seconds we go to bed when the dog goes to bed at 9:30 so that is when we went to bed.
 

1 comment:

  1. Great to see you getting these important lessons on how to prepare fresh fish. I love eating fresh fish! Maybe next time you could either focus on one part and describe what you see, feel, smell etc. Or you could write this as a procedure to teach others how to fillet a fish. Good work Hirini.

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