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Thursday 27 February 2020

Beach writing

today i was doing a little bit of writing about what my last time at the beach was my class task was to write about what it smells,see,feel,taste,hear. It felt easy to write because i love writing even though im not that good. Next time i think i can do better by putting more effort into my writing.
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3 comments:

  1. Whaea Dana1 March 2020 at 21:14

    I love the language you have used to describe your senses in this piece of writing. The seaweed slithering and being stuck in an ice cube create great images. Remember to proof read your learning story before you post. You need to fix up your capital letters.

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  2. Braxton-lee6 March 2020 at 11:41

    Hey Hirini its your amazing cousin Braxton. I love your writing and how you published it, I think you could work on your punctuation but I love everything else. When you have time come and check me out at https://kpsbraxtonleer.blogspot.com/ BYE YEET

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  3. Noah's Blog!6 March 2020 at 12:09

    Sup Hirini it's your fantastic cousin Noza.
    I Enjoyed reading your beach writing because i loved how you said that you described the way you said what you smell,taste and hear.
    i hope when you read this you can check my beach writing my blog is
    https://kpsnoahc.blogspot.com/
    Yeeet

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