cinquain poem

 for the last few minutes i have been working on my cinquain poem.we had to chose a animal and we had to search and look for words about about our animale.my animale was a lion.for example i chose zestful and intense describing what the animal dose and what its known fore.we also had to chose there words about the animal but it had to end with (ing).i chose king of the jungle because we had to chose a phrase with 4 words.lastly i had to chose  a better word and a better noun for lion. hope you enjoy this poem.

independent activatys.

 at the start of term 2 week 1 we started to do independent activatys.one of those activities was prototec.this was probably my second favourite thing to do in my slide.prototec helps with your maths and im getting better.

Wolf attck

for the last two weeks we have been writing a narrative. we had to make our own one up and create a good peace of writing.  i write a peace of writing talking about these three boys called joey,bailey and johnny. they went to explore this haunted forest. as going through the forest they see a house and go and explore.they see a wolf and it attacks them jey gets attacked and johnny and bailey ran away from the wolf and left joey behind.johnny comes back grabs the johnny comes to stabes the wolf all of them ran away scared and terrified but also laughing. they make it back to joeys house and are safe and sound.

 

                             wolf attack

There once was a town in the middle of two huge mountains. The town's name was called Main String.There lived three boys called Joey,Johnny and Bailey.They were well known there.They loved to explore new places and there was something about this town that they didn't understand. The people in the town often acted weird and mysterious. 

Joey was a quiet and very brave boy that loved to explore and was very very fast. Johnny was aggressive,predictive and selfish and lastly Bailey. He was selfish,stubborn and fearless. 

The next morning Joey felt like exploring. He wanted to go and explore nearby where he had heard about the legends of Mystery Forest. He went to Bailey's house and there he saw Bailey and Johnny. He was happy that he didn’t have to go all the way to Johnny house.

They didn’t know where to go, they just knew the direction to go in. They came upon the forest. It was dark,bushy and felt haunted. It was very scary. The forest had long trees that hung down over the path making it hard to walk through the forest.  “Apparently there is a haunted house with spiders and all sorts of disgusting insects and bugs,” stated Joey.  “ They say that the house has pieces of broken wood poking out of the big mold and disgusting colors all over the house.   That an old lady has stayed there for decades.  Also there is a big furious wolf that guards the house and never falls asleep or even blinks,” continued Joey.  Johnny replied “I heard that there once was an old lady that stayed there and the wolf ripped the old ladies head off in madness and after discovering that, they had a cat that was treated better than the wolf.”

The walked slowly through the forest, they heard a growling coming from the bush and footsteps getting loudly. Suddenly a figure jumped from the bushed, it was the wolf they had heard about. He had big teeth and grey wilk, wooly hair.  Johnny and Bailey ran away there leaving Joey there by himself.

That alerted the wolf and it ran directly towards Joey. It jumped on joey and bit him but he never gave up and protected himself from this furious beast.

As Johnny and Bailey were running away, Johnny started arguing about leaving Joey behind. Johnny ran back and grabbed the wolf from behind. Sadly he got bit so hard in his arm that it went through his arm. He screamed and that scream was so loud that it alerted Bailey so Bailey came back, jumped off this little ledge and stabbed  the vicious wolf.

All the boys ran away in fear but also laughing that they went on a great adventure and survived a wolf attack. As they got back to Joey's house they celebrated that they had killed a wolf and learned that the legends in the mystery town were not false but were true. 

All three boys still are scared that the wolf wasn’t really dead. Several years after that all boys became great explorers. They still talk about their first ever time they went exploring and are now most likely discovering new things for this mysterious world.

snack attack

 Hi my name is Hirini and  I am 12 years old and this is my first blog post of 2021.I am a year 8 at KawaKawa Primary Primary School and we have been learning about narrative writing. We had been making our own narrative.We had watched two short stories.We had to pick a movie ethier snack attack or the present. i chose snack attack. Here it is.

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Creative writing

Hi welcome to my creative writing. im a really good writer and i would love it if you read it.

My writing is made up story that i made. it talks about me a ghost and two figures.

Writing

It was a lonely night at 3am to be Exact .The wind blew like there was a tornado directly beside me. 

I was afraid of nothing, well that's what I thought until I saw a spooky figure in the dark. I froze for about 30 seconds, steering at the figure, then I ran. My heart beat faster than the jet. I couldn't believe what I saw.

Suddenly, I tripped. At that exact moment I felt like it was just a dream but I realised that the figure was getting closer and closer.  I passed out for quite a long time. I'm sure it was about 3 to 4 hours. When I woke up there was no one around. I was in a room with a flickering light, cutting in and out.

Out of the shadows, something that looked like a ghost bolted into my body. I was shocked and surprised that I woke up in my bed and at home. I felt like I was just dreaming until I figured that it wasn't a dream. I was back, but I wasn’t myself. My head hurt and I started doing different and unordinary things. I never left the house. There was a barrier or something blocking my way. I started seeing things and once again, .I fell on the ground and passed out for the third time. When I woke up I lay in a coffin terrified and it was definitely not comfortable in a small area and also I thought that I died. I banged furiously on the wall and my hand passed through the wall. I rised all the way through the coffin into the world outside. I was a ghost!. but Every 3 seconds I would see a photo, a vision of the black figure. This stranger was giving me nightmares! After about 5 months of being a ghost and experiencing strange things, something happened. The black figure must have teleported me directly in front of this figure. It went to attack me. Even though I was a ghost, it bit my arm off. It was very painful. The pain was beyond anything I have felt. I was not sure after that because it went black and I couldn't see anything. I was afraid and couldn't believe it bit my arm off. Then someone in a dark black and red clock walked in the room. I was terrified. Especially because it was just me and the person in the clock in the room i was sure i was shaking like an earthquake. The person in the clock had a sword in his hand.at first I thought that he was going to cut me. I was shocked until I managed to escape the ropes I was tied in and ran my fastest to the exit but then i ran back and took the sword from the man in the clock door. Then boosted it out to the exit. As I got out of the room there stood the black figure staring directly into my eyes. The figure stood at the end of the hall.. I did what any brave person would do. I ran straight towards it feeling fear but getting over it. I held the sword and aimed it towards the figure's heart. With all my strength, I pierced his heart and sent him back to where he came from. I was glad he was gone. I was no longer scared.

 

arataki group

 

Culture study. (China)

Here is my and braxtons slide show about china.

It was easy and hard but it was fun.

I really enjoyed it because i learned new things about china.

Next time i will improve on my work by putting some more words in our sentences.

Maori

We Were learning to learn te reo Maori.

Our task was to create a me and a made up name having a conversation in maori. 

Diversity writing

Te reo maori

Te Reo

We were learning a simple sentence in te reo. 

We found it hard because we keep messing up.

our task was to make a video of us saying what we did in the weekend but in Maori and respond with something we did in the weekend. 

next time i will make a video on screencastify so i can share it.

   

Coding with scratch

We are learning to code with scratch.
Our task was to create a chase game.
I found it hard  because i didn't know how to make my character move.
next time i will try and figure out how to move my stuff.

Codeing

I was learning how to code.
It was easy and hard but i had fun

Soft ball

This peace of writing that i write was kinda easy because I had
everything sorted out.
Also I'm a good and pretty fast type of writer cause I really love
writing I hope you enjoy my writing.


Soft ball.

-Bat

-Ball

-gloves

-Cleats.

-Batting Helmets.

Link

Cover the ball with your bare hand when it hits the glove.
Bend your knees as the pitcher lofts the ball.
The ball must cross over home plate while staying parallel to
and between the straight lines of your shoulders and knees to
be a strike.
Hit the ball with the bat into fair territory, and run to first base.

The purpose of this focus is to assist coaches to correctly develop
fundamentals. Softball skills in beginner level players.
Fielding positions. 1. Field positioning.

Procudural writing.

Code puzzle.

Today i was doing codeing with my class i didnit finish because i did a harder puzzle then others.

Somthing bad

DLO

Kingi and Hirini

My sensory poem

I was learning about our 5 senses.
Our task was to complete a sensory poem about our lockdown experience.
I found it easy because a knew that I have written a poem similar  to this at home before.
It was hard to look for some photos that relate to my lockdown experiences.
Next time i will work on making my work more spcifec.

My first week back at school.

The first week  was ok i think that i get my work done when im just sitting in the corner
Lock down was very lonely for me cause there was nothing to do i would usually just play the game or my dad will take fishing.My first day back at school was soo different i thought that more of my friends came to school but they didn't.
I think that things at school are very weird and one thing i thought is mostly weird is that if anyone wanted to have a toilet then they would
have to ask our teacher and she gives us some toilet paper to wipe the seat i know that its weird and uncomfortable but i get why we have to wipe the seat. we have done some covid 19 stuff and coloring.We also did some patterns and we had miss print us a car and we had to do what a kind of friend you have for example say the roof of a car is a friend that keeps me warm.I
mostly enjoyed seeing my friends and im proud of my self cause im more accurate at my work and i also made a new friend and his name is bailey hiku. I really enjoyed school and im gonna have a great new year.

writing

On wensday max and me stayed over at noah's house for the weekend on saturday we went to the beach and me and noah did different types of bombs off the pontoon and it was fun then it started to get cold so we went to the pools in kawakawa when we came back we straight went for a ride then came back at like 7: 13 then just played black ops zombies for a while then played gang beast then youtube then black ops then youtube after that we finally went to sleep. In the morning we decided if we were going to the kawakawa pools or the whangarei pools i said why not whangarei pools so we went to the pools in whangarei when we arrived we went to my antis then went out on there big trampoline and sang a song. After that happened we went to the pools it was fun on the obstaculos i came first in all my races and at the end there is a little slide thing that u can jump off i did it a couple times journing them i got some bruises here and there  but then the waves turned on i was excited but then the big slides opened i was the 4th one to line up when it was my turn me and noah went down noah called the dark on so i went down the light one after that i came back into lines and went into the dark it was better then the light on so then i keeped on going onto the dark slide over and over then we went to go get fish and chips they were nice then the worst thing happened well backing out of the driveway my nan accidentally hit a car well a lady was inside they did not have a fight just a little fight then sorted it because i have a buff cousin and uncle so i thought that they were scared  but the rest of the day was good though.On sunday me and noah stayed over at maxś house for what we mostly did was play VR and ride the bikes. in the morning on sunday noah and max were crashed and me well i was just playing fortnite then i just realised that noah had church at 9 so i woke him up then he farted under the blanket so i opened the window then i pushed him around until he woke up then he got up and raced home and so far that i heard was that he got home had a shower and then he asked his mum if he had to go to church then his mum said that he doesn't have to go if he doesn't want to he said no because he wanted to play with us and because of the game so he came back and we all had breakfast it was steak and eggs  it was nice after that we played the game me and max played fortnite and he played on mobile and i played on ps4 then we played blackops 3 and found a aussie person talking crack to us so then we talked crack to him after the game we left for a ride for a little bit then went to look for a secret spot to hide out in after that we played more game and then went for more rides then it was time for noah's pops birthday then we sang some songs then did the ngapuhi haka then hugged him then sang some more songs after that we all had to go home so then we all went home and then played fortnite for the rest of the night.