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Tuesday, 26 May 2020

My sensory poem




I was learning about our 5 senses.
Our task was to complete a sensory poem about our lockdown experience.
I found it easy because a knew that I have written a poem similar  to this at home before.
It was hard to look for some photos that relate to my lockdown experiences.
Next time i will work on making my work more spcifec.

1 comment:

  1. This is a great poem Hirini, I am pleased that you were able to write it easily because you have created one before. I too experienced some of the same things, dogs barking, burgers, snuggling into warm blankets.
    Next time, try to add a bit more detail or descriptive language to your sentences to give the reader more information.
    Great job!

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